I am a Year 5 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Miss McLeod. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Thursday, November 26, 2020
3 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.
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Hi Brooklyn,
ReplyDeleteThose cute dogs on your advertisement made me want to read it more. Have you thought of a slogan (little catchy sentence) that you could add to it? Maybe something like 'A crunch a day keeps the doctor away'.....?
Have a great day
Mrs M
Hi my name is Phoenix and i like that you used mr bests logo in coco crunch
ReplyDeletedid think about puting taste the crunch why did you do it whats your favorate part cant wait for your reply Phoenix
hi phoenix thanks for the comment and i thought instead of Mr beast 6000 coco crunch 6000 thanks again for the comment from brooklyn
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