I am a Year 5 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Miss McLeod. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Thursday, August 20, 2020
4 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.
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Talofa, I am Kelly from South Hornby School. I liked the way you made this. Did you think about telling someone what to put into their sandwich? I noticed that you like sandwiches. How did you get idea of sandwiches? What did you use in the making of this process?
ReplyDeleteHave a great day,
From Kelly
thanks for the comment kelly
DeleteKia ora, its BRIANA here and i like how you have added a picture of a yummy sandwich. Maybe nex time add more detail but i love it., good job brookyln.
ReplyDeleteTalofa my name is grace from south hornby school.I like the way you put your instructions in a cool way.Next time you could add your familys favorite spread in sandwiches.You did a really good job.
ReplyDeleteGracie w2.